Here is one of my better laps:
Feedback is very welcome, I wrote what I think I need to improve on in terms of lines in the description of the video. After that hopefully I can start practicing on when and how hard to brake and throttle application and smoothness. I'm still a rookie so all feedback is welcome and appreciated, I know I have a long way to go!
I'll upload more later, I have a few laps of trying to catch up with dorifto88 while he was pulling some decent laps in front of me.